DIALOG. The first dialog in a zombie-spit page, and the tightest drawing I’ve done on a page thus far. IT TAKES FOREVER. I think I’m gonna simplify things a bit for future pages so I can eventually get my production speed up to the point that I can consistently make multiple posts a week. Regardless – enjoy. Hopefully it’s clear what’s going on here.
I love that your consciences don’t just appear *POOF* above his left and right shoulders – way to break with tradition, Jim. And I’m with the angel – I keep looking back at Page 15 and thinking the same thing! ^^; Lovely artwork and good dialogue – works for me. It was kinda cool, however, how you did the 14 page prologue without a single word spoken.
Thanks Doug! I originally had planned on doing the classic conscience routine with tiny versions of the main character, but then I thought I needed to change things up at least a little bit. As for the lack of dialog, yeah, I wasn’t ready to do the whole “self narration” thing that’s pretty common, so I figured I’d just work on showing, not telling.